ASSIGNMENT 22A
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1WFRuL6sYrk
2-3. The feedback on elevator pitch 2 was very useful compared to pitch 1. While I was given many compliments on the presentation, I also was given ways to improve my idea for the customers. One way I did this was by using advice given by a classmate to offer a promo of your first 2 months while using Smart Park. I also put on more professional attire as well as turned off my ceiling fan which I did not do in elevator pitch 2.
Christopher,
ReplyDeleteI really appreciate the changes you made for this elevator pitch. Those changes really made a difference and improved your pitch tremendously. I was able to hear your words clearly, and I wasn’t distracted by anything else, and was able to just listen to you. Additionally, the adjustment you made to your attire was a smart move. You really listened to our comments, and it really showed. I really like your business idea, I can’t wait to see where you take it. Thank you for sharing.