Assignment 17A
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HW7JeBfVIuo
2-3. I actually received no comments on my first pitch. However, there are a couple of things I changed. One thing I changed was the initial Introduction. Instead of introducing myself I got right to the point of what I am selling. In addition, I also added additional numbers regarding the cost of the app.
Christopher,
ReplyDeleteThat’s unfortunate to hear that you didn’t really receive any feedback. I think that would have helped your pitch even more. I really liked your pitch, you didn’t speak to fast, and I knew what you were talking about. I appreciate you taking out other information such as your name, and gave us more information about your product, and what you want. I really liked your product, and am glad that you shared this post with us.
Elly
Hi!
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job on your pitch, especially with just using your own self-feedback. Your tone and pitch was great and easy to listen to. I instantly related to you because I hate parking on campus and I like how you used crowd engagement in your pitch! Maybe you can add a promo for new people to sign up to your app by waiving the $10 fee for the first month or discounting it to $5.
Linnea Lindeman